Want to enroll in another academy
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I want to enroll in an academy of dancing. When i went to the concert at first, i realized that i like dancing and singing each other. So after that, i’ve often gone to karaoke. But i always felt sorry that i don’t know how to dance to the music. So that’s the reason why i want to learn dancing someday.
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I want to enroll in an academy of dancing.
>> I want to enroll in a dance academy someday.
When i went to the concert at first, i realized that i like dancing and singing each other.
>> I went to a concert before and that was the moment I realized that I like singing and dancing.
So after that, i’ve often gone to karaoke. But i always felt sorry that i don’t know how to dance to the music.
>>So, after that, I\'ve often gone to some karaoke places, but I\'ve always felt sorry for myself because I don\'t know how to dance to the music.
So that’s the reason why i want to learn dancing someday.
>> That\'s the reason why I really want to learn how to dance someday.
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