Wanted to accomplish many things myself

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The past tense of \'take\' is \'took\'.

Thank you for sharing me about your story. Believe in yourself, because I believe that

you will achieve more and you still have a lot of things to learn. See you tomorrow. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

When I see homework, I’m impressed because that’s what I have always been thinking.

>> When I saw the homework, I was impressed because that’s what I have always been thinking.

I have thought how I want to live my whole life so many times, accomplishing many things or taking it easy.

>> CORRECT

And everytime, the answer is the same.

>> And it has always been the same.

I want to live spending all of my energy.

>> CORRECT

I will try hard to achieve my goal.

>> CORRECT

And if I make it, I’ll happy with feeling I’m being become a better person.

>> And if I made it, I’ll be emotionally happy that I’m becoming a better person.

Accomplishing gives people achievement.

>> CORRECT

I hope that. That’s what I truly gain.

>> CORRECT

Taking everything easy means I don’t need to try hard.

>> CORRECT

And the thing I taked that way, It can’t be real mine. Because I don’t spend time to achieve that,

>> Actually, I didn\'t work hard to achieve that so it can\'t be really mine.

I don’t know the worth and haven’t any feeling that I was taked.

>> I don’t know if it\'s worth it and I don\'t think that I took it.

I never want to live convenient.

>> I never want to have a convenient life.

The life with easy path is meaningless for me.

>> CORRECT

It looks like I was taked, but actually it doesn’t give me anything.

>> It feels like I was taken by something, but actually it doesn’t give me anything.

It’s like death, isn’t it

>> CORRECT

So I really want to take something for my effort, even I’ll have a little failure.

>> So I really want to make an effort even I make some failures.