war
학생이 쓴 원문
I am sad that I often heard news of wars around the world.
It is true that the time of humanitaraian crisis.
I am afraid of Islamic terrorism and indiscriminate attacks toward the world.
It should not be admitted in the name of any religion and God.
강사 첨삭
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Your hard work will pay off!
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I am sad that I often heard news of wars around the world.
>>I am sad that I often hear news of wars around the world.
It is true that the time of humanitaraian crisis.
>> It is true that this is a time of humanitarian crisis.
I am afraid of Islamic terrorism and indiscriminate attacks toward the world.
>>I am afraid of Islamic terrorism and indiscriminate attacks towards the world.
It should not be admitted in the name of any religion and God.
>>Correct!
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