War, that should never repeated again.
학생이 쓴 원문
In my personal understanding, \'War\' is a tragic that must not happen again. When the war begins lots of people lost their families and lovers. When I saw the news about the war between the United States and Iran, I felt so bad and heartbroken about people who got killed and lost their peaceful lives. I hope everyone can get back to their normal lives as soon as possible and feel free from the war.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Melody!
Wars are often considered as futile due to the enormous loss of life, suffering, and damage, which often outweigh any territorial or political gains.
The crucial question, however, is not how the attacked nation should reply, but rather how to keep the aggressive nation from invading. One strategy to help with this would be to raise knowledge that warmaking endangers people rather than protecting them.
Thank you for answering your homework. See you later in class!
Practice English whenever you can.^^
__T. Mayleen :)
War, that should never repeated again.
>>> War should never be repeated again.
In my personal understanding, \'War\' is a tragic that must not happen again.
>>> In my personal understanding, \'war\' is a tragedy that must not happen again.
When the war begins lots of people lost their families and lovers.
>>> When the war begins, lots of people lose their families and lovers.
When I saw the news about the war between the United States and Iran, I felt so bad and heartbroken about people who got killed and lost their peaceful lives.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: When I saw the news about the war between the United States and Iran, I felt so devastated and heartbroken about people who got killed and lost their peaceful lives.
I hope everyone can get back to their normal lives as soon as possible and feel free from the war.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: I wish everyone may resume their normal life as soon as possible and feel free of the war.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.