warm weather
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강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]!
Thank you so much for your composition. It’s good to hear that you like
plants. Take care and have a nice Monday! it was warm today >> It is warm
today. so i wore light
one-piece that was really beautiful >> So I’m wearing a
light one- piece which is really beautiful. >> Correct. >> So I am in high
spirit. >> One of my hobbies
is taking care of plants. >> I already have a
mini cactus which has no thorns.
recently many flowers
begin to bloom
so i am in high
spirits
the one of my hobbies is growing up plants
i am buying roes herb which is rose shape soon
>> I will buy a rose
herb which is rose shape.
i already have mini cactus that don't have thorn
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