Was 2019 a good year for you? In what way or why not?

2020-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

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Was 2019 a good year for you? In what way or why not? When I see the backward 2019 year, It was very busy year for me. Especially, The ongoing project in the company made me very busy. Many problem of project gave me big pressure because It was not easy to solve them. I got much stress for my business and I had to try to solve many problems in this project. So, I had to work to the late time. However, There are good event for me and my family in the last year. First of all, I was so happy for buying new apartment. We moved to new house last fall. Although our neighborhood is still constructing, I am satisfied for my new apartment. The design is very modern, and we can use many convenience facility in the apartment. I hope to get a many good events in this year. Happy new year.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]. I appreciate your time and effort in doing your homework. Continue practicing your written and grammar skills. See you later in our class time. ^^


When I see the backward 2019 year, It was very busy year for me.

>>>When I look back the year 2019, it was a very busy year for me.

OR>>>When I reminisce the year 2019, it was a very busy year for me.

Especially, The ongoing project in the company made me very busy.

>>>Especially, the ongoing project in my company made me very busy.

Many problem of project gave me big pressure because It was not easy to solve them.

>>>Many problems from the project gave me big pressure because it was not easy to solve them.

I got much stress for my business and I had to try to solve many problems in this project.

>>>I got so much stress from my business and I tried to solve many problems in this project.

So, I had to work to the late time.

>>>So, I had to work overtime.

However, There are good event for me and my family in the last year.

>>>However, there were good events for me and my family last year.

First of all, I was so happy for buying new apartment.

>>>First of all, I was so happy for buying a new apartment.

We moved to new house last fall.

>>>We moved to our new house last fall.

Although our neighborhood is still constructing, I am satisfied for my new apartment.

>>>Although our neighborhood construction is still ongoing, I am satisfied for my new apartment.

The design is very modern, and we can use many convenience facility in the apartment.

>>>The design is very modern and we can use many convenient facilities in the apartment.

I hope to get a many good events in this year.

>>>I hope to have many good events this year.

OR>>>I hope to have many good memories this year.



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