Was 2019 a good year for you? In what way or why not?
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When I see the backward 2019 year, It was very busy year for me.
>>>When I look back the year 2019, it was a very busy year for me.
OR>>>When I reminisce the year 2019, it was a very busy year for me.
Especially, The ongoing project in the company made me very busy.
>>>Especially, the ongoing project in my company made me very busy.
Many problem of project gave me big pressure because It was not easy to solve them.
>>>Many problems from the project gave me big pressure because it was not easy to solve them.
I got much stress for my business and I had to try to solve many problems in this project.
>>>I got so much stress from my business and I tried to solve many problems in this project.
So, I had to work to the late time.
>>>So, I had to work overtime.
However, There are good event for me and my family in the last year.
>>>However, there were good events for me and my family last year.
First of all, I was so happy for buying new apartment.
>>>First of all, I was so happy for buying a new apartment.
We moved to new house last fall.
>>>We moved to our new house last fall.
Although our neighborhood is still constructing, I am satisfied for my new apartment.
>>>Although our neighborhood construction is still ongoing, I am satisfied for my new apartment.
The design is very modern, and we can use many convenience facility in the apartment.
>>>The design is very modern and we can use many convenient facilities in the apartment.
I hope to get a many good events in this year.
>>>I hope to have many good events this year.
OR>>>I hope to have many good memories this year.
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