Was bullying a big problem at your school? How?
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Bullying is a big problem in my school. because bullying can cause a lot of pain and mental damage to the victim Also, the parents of the child can report the school.
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Bullying is a big problem in my school. because bullying can cause a lot of pain and mental damage to the victim
>>>> Bullying is a big problem in my school because it can cause a lot of pain and mental damage to the victim.
Also, the parents of the child can report the school.
>>> Also, the parents of the child can report to the school.
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