Was junior high school a happy time for you? Why?

2020-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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Yes, it was a happy time for me. Because I had many good friends and teachers in my middle school. And I wore a school uniform for the first time and took a test. I could experience and learn many things in my middle school.

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~ T. Tricia

Yes, it was a happy time for me.
>> CORRECT!

Because I had many good friends and teachers in my middle school.
>> Because I had many good friends and teachers during middle school.

And I wore a school uniform for the first time and took a test.
>> CORRECT!

I could experience and learn many things in my middle school.
>> I experienced and learned many things during middle school.

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