Was last year a good year for you? In what way or why not?
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I think that 2020 was not the good year, but it was a special year. We could feel the attitude of the people about the country. Also I could experience that depending on the internet in almost of the whole day.
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I think that 2020 was not the good year, but it was a special year.
>> I think that 2020 was not a good year, but it was a special one. [Avoid repeating the same words or expressions in one sentence.]
We could feel the attitude of the people about the country.
>> correct
Also I could experience that depending on the internet in almost of the whole day.
>> Also, I could experience internet dependency throughout the whole day.
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