Was the last year a good year for you? What were some of its highlights?
학생이 쓴 원문
It was an impressive year. .Because my high school senior life was started. As you know, every high school seniors in korea ready to study college exam. I also studied hard last year. So it was an impressive year for me.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]!
Wow, congratulations for having an impressive year! I hope that this year will be the same, if not, it will be better! Good luck!
T. Aki~
It was an impressive year. .Because my high school senior life was started.
>>> It was an impressive year because my high school senior life was about to end.
As you know, every high school seniors in korea ready to study college exam.
>>> As you know, every high school senior in Korea is ready to study for the college exam.
I also studied hard last year. So it was an impressive year for me.
>>> CORRECT!
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