Was there a situation when you felt tongue-tied?
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The situation coming up with at first is my first job interview. When I was senior in university, I got a first job interview. At that time, I was too nervous, so I took a drinking medicine to help me relax. But there was a side-effect. I thought My head seemed like white paper, and My tongue was tied. I failed in the interview. Yes I knew I failed during the interview because I couldn’t answers well. So the interviewer wouldn’t know that I was saying.
It was a good experience. After then I got my job now in second interview. I learned a lot through the first interview.
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Hi Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleThe situation coming up with at first is my first job interview.
>> The situation coming up at first place is my first job interview.
When I was senior in university, I got a first job interview.
>> When I was a senior in the university, I got a first job interview.
At that time, I was too nervous, so I took a drinking medicine to help me relax.
>> At that time, I was too nervous, so I took a medicine to help me relax.
But there was a side-effect.
>> CORRECT!
I thought My head seemed like white paper, and My tongue was tied.
>> I thought my head seemed like white paper, and my tongue was tied.
I failed in the interview.
>> CORRECT!
Yes I knew I failed during the interview because I couldn’t answers well.
>> Yes I knew I failed during the interview because I couldn’t answer well.
So the interviewer wouldn’t know that I was saying.
>> So the interviewer doesn\'t know that I was saying.
It was a good experience.
>> CORRECT!
After then I got my job now in second interview.
>> I got my job after the second interview.
I learned a lot through the first interview.
>> CORRECT!
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