Was there a time in your life when you had less freedom than you do now?
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Hello Sir [이름]!
I was surprised.
I can\'t imagine how I would deal with that kind of situation.
I think I would quit. It is really difficult.
Why do you think students should experience it?
Will it be beneficial for them in the future?
Thanks for sharing your story.
I am so proud of you.
Teacher Nina
The most difficult time in my life was high school days.
>> The most difficult time in my life was my high school days.
>> The most difficult time in my life was during my high school days.
All the students without an exception had to live in the school dormitory in accordance with the school’s policy and as one of conditions of admission.
>> correct
>> All student without an exception should live in the school dormitory in accordance to the school\'s policy.
It was not a typical school dormitory, but it was like a military academy.
>> correct
As many as six students had to live in one room.
>> correct
>> Six students stay in one room.
Students had to follow strict resident policies such as getting up at the fixed time, having a morning formation at the barrack square, practicing Taekwondo or jogging for an hour, and eating breakfast in an order and given time.
>> Did you mean: Students had to follow strict resident policies such as getting up at a fixed time, having a morning formation at the barrack square, practicing Taekwondo or jogging for an hour, and eating breakfast in order and at a given time.
>> Students had to follow strict resident policies such as getting up at the said time, having a morning formation at the barrack square, practicing Taekwondo or jogging for an hour, and eating breakfast in order and a specific time.
There was an evening roll call, which was the most difficult time a day.
>> There was an evening roll call, which was the most difficult time of the day.
>> There was a roll call in the evening and it was the most difficult time of the day.
We have never gone to bed without having physical punishment.
>> correct
>> We have never gone to bed without having a physical punishment.
We often were beaten by seniors with a bat or a mopping rod.
>> correct
>> We are often hit by the senior with a bat or a mopping rod.
The all freshmen and juniors were divided to a platoon and a battalion.
>> All freshmen and juniors were divided into a platoon and a battalion.
The house master and selected senior students acted as a caption and a platoon leader, respectively.
>> correct
We even had to get a special permission to get out of school.
>> correct
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