Was this year better or worse than last year? How come?
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In my opinion, this year was better than last year.
First, I met many friends in the middle school and also I met a lot of good teachers in here.
I went to school more days than last year, and I think I had more happy time.
So I think this year was better than last year for me.
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First, I met many friends in the middle school and also I met a lot of good teachers in here.
>> First, I met many friends in my middle school and also I met a lot of good teachers.
I went to school more days than last year, and I think I had more happy time.
>> I went to school more days than last year, and I think it made me happier.
So I think this year was better than last year for me.
>> CORRECT
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