Waste
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s a sad reality that wealth countries product lots of plastic waste.
It become that the amount of plastic production and consumption seems a symbol of economical power.
Some countries are troulbed with plastic waste and emvironment issue, some are troubled with poverty, diseses and terrot etc.
They are too far away situation. They are hardly agreement about the issues each other.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Ms. [이름]!
Yes it\'s a sad scenario. Most wealthy countries have the same mindset that they are not bothered because they believe that they can manage through their advance technologies and so on. But everyone must participate in saving the Earth regardless of one\'s economic status.
Have a great day!
Aki~
It\'s a sad reality that wealth countries product lots of plastic waste.
>>> It\'s a sad reality that wealthy countries product lots of plastic waste.
It become that the amount of plastic production and consumption seems a symbol of economical power.
>>> It shows that the amount of plastic production and consumption seems a symbol of economical power.
Some countries are troulbed with plastic waste and emvironment issue, some are troubled with poverty, diseses and terrot etc.
>>> Some countries are troubled with plastic waste and environmental issues, some are troubled with poverty, diseases, terror, etc.
They are too far away situation. They are hardly agreement about the issues each other.
>>> They are too far away from the situation. They are hardly in agreement about the issues with each other.
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