Watching movies at home

2023-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Joy

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I prefer watching movies at home because It is more covenient. I can choose the time and place. I have subscribed two streaming platforms such as Netflix and Disny +. There are different concept between them. Thare are more public contents in Netflix and There are more mania contents in Disny +. I think Netflix is more exciting and Disny is more dramatic. Not noly I can watch any kind of movies easily at home but also cheaper price than watching in cinema. That\'s why I prefer watching moives at home.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Thomas!

I appreciate your efforts on doing your homework. Don\'t forget to double check the spelling of the words next time. Nonetheless, they\'re good and I believe you can still do better. Keep up the good work!

-Joy ^^

I prefer watching movies at home because It is more covenient.

>> I prefer watching movies at home because it is more convenient.

I can choose the time and place.

>> I can choose the time and place.

I have subscribed two streaming platforms such as Netflix and Disny +.

>> I have subscribed to two streaming platforms such as Netflix and Disney+.

There are different concept between them.

>> There are different concepts between them.

Thare are more public contents in Netflix and There are more mania contents in Disny +.

>> There are more public contents in Netflix and there are more niche contents in Disney+.

I think Netflix is more exciting and Disny is more dramatic.

>> I think Netflix is more exciting and Disney+ is more dramatic.

 Not noly I can watch any kind of movies easily at home but also cheaper price than watching in cinema.

>> Not only can I watch any kind of movies easily at home, but it is also cheaper than watching in a cinema.

 That\'s why I prefer watching moives at home.

>> That\'s why I prefer watching movies at home.

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