Watching the television that I relieve stress a day.

2018-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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After take a sleep my childrens I watch the television that I like the most happiest time in a day. During watching the television, I drink a can of beer. Keeping switch up and down the remotecontroller without thought and remove stress a day. Another way to relive stress is talking to my best friends. My best friend always with me whenever I need her.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Stress is really unavoidable. We always have it around us. What\'s important is how we deal with that stress. It\'s good that you have ways to feel good after a stressful day.  

- T. Beth

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After take a sleep my childrens I watch the television that I like the most happiest time in a day.

>>>  After putting my children to sleep, I watch the television that I like and this is my happiest time of the day. 
During watching the television, I drink a can of beer.

>>> While watching television, I drink a can of beer.  

Keeping switch up and down the remotecontroller without thought and remove stress a day.
>>> Constantly changing the channel with the remote control without having to worry about anything relieves my stress for the day.     
Another way to relive stress is talking to my best friends.

>>> CORRECT.   

My best friend always with me whenever I need her.

>>> My best friend is always with me when I need her.   

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