Water

2016-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Water is very important for peoples body. If you don't drink any water you can hardly even last a day. Even though you hadn't eat any food you can survive a least a week. So we have to try all our best not to waste a lot of water.

강사 첨삭

Hello there MIN!^_^ Happy, happy Wednesday! :)   Thank you so much for this composition, Min. I might not be able to talk to you again so I hope you\'ll continue practicing and improving your English skills. Don\'t forget the lessons we\'ve had. Memorize them by heart. Can you do that?^_^ Stay positive and please take care.   ~T. Mayleen~   Water is very important for peoples body. >> Water is very important to people. If you don\'t drink any water you can hardly even last a day. >> If you don\'t drink water, you\'d hardly last a day. Even though you hadn\'t eat any food you can survive a least a week. >> Eve though you haven\'t eaten any food for a week you can survive if there\'s water. So we have to try all our best not to waste a lot of water. >> And so we have to conserve and not waste water.

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