Water
학생이 쓴 원문
Water is very important for peoples body.
If you don't drink any water you can hardly even last a day.
Even though you hadn't eat any food you can survive a least a week.
So we have to try all our best not to waste a lot of water.
강사 첨삭
Hello there MIN!^_^
Happy, happy Wednesday! :)
Thank you so much for this composition, Min.
I might not be able to talk to you again so I hope you\'ll continue practicing and improving your English skills.
Don\'t forget the lessons we\'ve had. Memorize them by heart. Can you do that?^_^
Stay positive and please take care.
~T. Mayleen~
Water is very important for peoples body.
>> Water is very important to people.
If you don\'t drink any water you can hardly even last a day.
>> If you don\'t drink water, you\'d hardly last a day.
Even though you hadn\'t eat any food you can survive a least a week.
>> Eve though you haven\'t eaten any food for a week you can survive if there\'s water.
So we have to try all our best not to waste a lot of water.
>> And so we have to conserve and not waste water.
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