\"Water and air…have become global garbage cans.\" What do you think of his words?
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~~Teacher May~~
Did he insist that our world would be polluted by people\'s abuse?
>> CORRECT
I have same opinion of him.
>> I have same opinion as him.
Worlds have been trying to develop their countries by using materials that might cause air pollution.
>> The world has been trying to develop their countries by using materials that might cause air pollution.
As a result, global warming become a number one problem in the world.
>>As a result, global warming became the number one problem in the world.
All countries make an association for solving common problems that they will face in near future.
>> CORRECT
However, this can not be solved with government oneself,
>> However, this can not be solved by the government itself,
people all around the world must participate what environmental professional ask for.
>> People all around the world must participate what environmental professionals ask for.
One of the efforts people can try is trying not to use a one time disposable products and to use public transportation is helpful for saving our world.
>> One of the efforts people can do is trying not to use a one-time disposable products and to use public transportation which is helpful for saving our world.
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