\"Water and air…have become global garbage cans.\" What do you think of his words?

2019-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Did he insist that our world would be polluted by people\'s abuse? I have same opinion of him. Worlds have been trying to develop their countries by using materials that might cause air pollution. As a result, global warming become a number one problem in the world. All countries make an association for solving common problems that they will face in near future. However, this can not be solved with government oneself, people all around the world must participate what environmental professional ask for. One of the efforts people can try is trying not to use a one time disposable products and to use public transportation is helpful for saving our world.

강사 첨삭

I appreciate your opinions [이름]. Well-said. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Did he insist that our world would be polluted by people\'s abuse?

>> CORRECT

I have same opinion of him.

>> I have same opinion as him.

Worlds have been trying to develop their countries by using materials that might cause air pollution.

>> The world has been trying to develop their countries by using materials that might cause air pollution.

As a result, global warming become a number one problem in the world.

>>As a result, global warming became the number one problem in the world.
 All countries make an association for solving common problems that they will face in near future.

>> CORRECT

However, this can not be solved with government oneself,

>> However, this can not be solved by the government itself,

people all around the world must participate what environmental professional ask for.

>> People all around the world must participate what environmental professionals ask for.

One of the efforts people can try is trying not to use a one time disposable products and to use public transportation is helpful for saving our world.

>> One of the efforts people can do is trying not to use a one-time disposable products and to use public transportation which is helpful for saving our world.

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