water plants.
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning. lei.~
yesterday was sunshing day. trees in the mountain changed its leaf as a bright green color. i wanted go out and enjoy the green on impulse. but i was satisfied with just seeing.
anyway, from an early moring, i was quite busy. because i watered plants which in 4th floor. ( i am working at 4th floor. because my boss and the president's room are at 4th floor.my seat are at between both room.)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
You have a good composition here. There were some sentences where there are misspelled words. Some of the sentences got errors with the subject verb agreement but don’t worry they are just minor corrections. See you later. Have a great day!
Lei J
Good morning. lei.~
>>correctyesterday was sunshing day.
>>yesterday was a sunny day
trees in the mountain changed its leaf as a bright green color.
>> trees in the mountain changed their leaves to a bright green color.
i wanted go out and enjoy the green on impulse. but i was satisfied with just seeing.
>>I wanted to go out and enjoy the green scenery by impulse, but I got satisfied just by looking at it.anyway, from an early moring, i was quite busy.
>>anyways, starting this morning I was quite busy
because i watered plants which in 4th floor.
>>because I needed to water the plants in the 4th floor
( i am working at 4th floor. because my boss and the president's room are at 4th floor>>I am working in the 4th floor since my boss and the president’s office are located in that floor
.my seat are at between both room.)>>my table is located in between the two rooms/offices.
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