water plants.

2010-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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since last winter, plants are at 4th floor. before the winter, i didn't need to care of it. but since last winter, i need to take care of them. while clean the meeting room, i noticed that it's time to water plants. and i watered them. during watering, i found out greenfles!! @ @ . my boss told me the factor of greenfly is plant didn't take a shower. (it means wild plant is take a shower thru raining, but inside plant is not.) to get rid of greenfles, i gave a fall water to each plant.

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since last winter, plants are at 4th floor. >>Since last winter, the plants were transferred to the 4th floor before the winter, i didn't need to care of it. >>before winter, I didn’t need to take care of it. but since last winter, i need to take care of them. >>correct while clean the meeting room, i noticed that it's time to water plants. >>while cleaning the meeting room, i noticed that it's time to water plants. and i watered them. >>correct during watering, i found out greenfles!! @ @ . >>while watering the plants, I found some green flies my boss told me the factor of greenfly is plant didn't take a shower. >>my boss told me the reason why there is a green fly in the plants, it is because it didn’t take a showr (it means wild plant is take a shower thru raining, but inside plant is not.) >>correct to get rid of greenfles, i gave a fall water to each plant. >>in order to get rid of the green flies, I need to sprinkle water to each of the plants.

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