water plants.
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since last winter, plants are at 4th floor. before the winter, i didn't need to care of it. but since last winter, i need to take care of them. while clean the meeting room, i noticed that it's time to water plants. and i watered them. during watering, i found out greenfles!! @ @ . my boss told me the factor of greenfly is plant didn't take a shower. (it means wild plant is take a shower thru raining, but inside plant is not.) to get rid of greenfles, i gave a fall water to each plant.
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since last winter, plants are at 4th floor.
>>Since last winter, the plants were transferred to the 4th floor
before the winter, i didn't need to care of it.
>>before winter, I didn’t need to take care of it.
but since last winter, i need to take care of them.
>>correct
while clean the meeting room, i noticed that it's time to water plants.
>>while cleaning the meeting room, i noticed that it's time to water plants.
and i watered them.
>>correct
during watering, i found out greenfles!! @ @ .
>>while watering the plants, I found some green flies
my boss told me the factor of greenfly is plant didn't take a shower.
>>my boss told me the reason why there is a green fly in the plants, it is because it didn’t take a showr
(it means wild plant is take a shower thru raining, but inside plant is not.)
>>correct
to get rid of greenfles, i gave a fall water to each plant.
>>in order to get rid of the green flies, I need to sprinkle water to each of the plants.
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