Way that I value other\'s time
학생이 쓴 원문
I always respect other\'s time. The biggest reason is \'If I don\'t respect(be late or don\'t keep their promise)their time, I can cause them some problems\'. It\'s because my personality is that hate to cause problems to others. Also, I don\'t want to be scolded because I wasn\'t punctual. All of these reasons are come from my personality. But sometimes I can\'t respect other\'s time.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daniel! It\'s good to know that you respect other people\'s time. At a young age, you already know that being late can cause problems. Great!
Please be careful with sentence construction though. Take note of the corrections given.
-Teacher Debbie
I always respect other\'s time.
>> I often respect other people\'s time.
The biggest reason is \'If I don\'t respect(be late or don\'t keep their promise)their time, I can cause them some problems\'.
>> The biggest reason is that if I don\'t respect their time by being late or by not keeping my promises, I can cause them some problems.
It\'s because my personality is that hate to cause problems to others.
>> I hate causing problems to others.
Also, I don\'t want to be scolded because I wasn\'t punctual.
>> Moreover, I wouldn\'t want to be scolded because I wasn\'t punctual.
All of these reasons are come from my personality.
>> This is my personality.
But sometimes I can\'t respect other\'s time.
>> However, sometimes I can\'t respect others\' time.
Please be careful with sentence construction though. Take note of the corrections given.
-Teacher Debbie
I always respect other\'s time.
>> I often respect other people\'s time.
The biggest reason is \'If I don\'t respect(be late or don\'t keep their promise)their time, I can cause them some problems\'.
>> The biggest reason is that if I don\'t respect their time by being late or by not keeping my promises, I can cause them some problems.
It\'s because my personality is that hate to cause problems to others.
>> I hate causing problems to others.
Also, I don\'t want to be scolded because I wasn\'t punctual.
>> Moreover, I wouldn\'t want to be scolded because I wasn\'t punctual.
All of these reasons are come from my personality.
>> This is my personality.
But sometimes I can\'t respect other\'s time.
>> However, sometimes I can\'t respect others\' time.
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