Ways of travelling 40 miles away from home
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Erine!
My parents live in the city 70km away, a little farther than 40 miles, from where I live. When visiting my parents, I usually take a train. There are some alternative ways going there, including driving my own car, taking an intercity bus or taking a train. Driving myself would be the best in the sense that I can leave at anytime and from anywhere I want. Therefore it takes the least time among the options. The cost, however, would be the highest. Taking intercity buses or trains costs less and provides comfort travel. I can also save my time by taking a nap or reading a book during commuting. But securing seats is sometimes very competitive in busy hours. Travelling without a seat makes me quite tired. My choice overall is taking the train because I don’t have a car for now and my home is closer to the train station than the bus terminal. Moreover, I like to watch the suburban areas through the window and take a rest when travel.
Thank you! See you tomorrow!
강사 첨삭
Hi, Chae Yoon!^^
I can really say that your house is far away from the usual hometown!
However, I believe that in any situation, it will always be worth it visiting it as well as our parents.
My hometown is also far from where I am working now.
I need to take a bus for four to five hours to visit my family.^^
Let\'s talk about this in class, too!^^~~Teacher Erine~~
Hello Erine!>> Correct.My parents live in the city 70km away, a little farther than 40 miles, from where I live. >> My parents live in a city 70 km away, a little farther than 40 miles from where I live.
When visiting my parents, I usually take a train.
>> Correct.
There are some alternative ways going there, including driving my own car, taking an intercity bus or taking a train.
>> There are some alternative ways to go there including driving my own car, taking an intercity bus or train.
Driving myself would be the best in the sense that I can leave at anytime and from anywhere I want.
>> Driving by my car would be the best in a sense that I can leave anytume and from anywhere I want.
Therefore it takes the least time among the options.
>> Correct.
The cost, however, would be the highest.
>> Correct.
Taking intercity buses or trains costs less and provides comfort travel.
>> Taking intercity buses or trains costs less and provides comfort while traveling/comfortable trip.
I can also save my time by taking a nap or reading a book during commuting.
>> Correct.
But securing seats is sometimes very competitive in busy hours.
>> Correct.
Travelling without a seat makes me quite tired.
>> Correct.
My choice overall is taking the train because I don’t have a car for now and my home is closer to the train station than the bus terminal.
>> My choice among the rest is taking the train because I don\'t have a car at the moment and my home is closer to the train station compared to the bus terminal.
Moreover, I like to watch the suburban areas through the window and take a rest when travel. >> Moreover, I like watching the suburban areas through the window and take a rest when traveling.Thank you! See you tomorrow!
>> Correct.
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