We all know that working out is necessary, but why do you think so many people do not do it?
학생이 쓴 원문
So many people exercise a lot in Korea. That\'s why we can use enough time for our life by short working time.
And we want to have muscular and slim body by broadcast .
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ms. [이름]!
So many people exercise a lot in Korea.
>>> correct
That\'s why we can use enough time for our life by short working time.
>>> That\'s why we can use enough time in our lives by working for a short time.
And we want to have muscular and slim body by broadcast.
>>> In addition, we want to have muscular and slim body to show off.
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