We ARE different, but we can be friends.

2017-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Recently a monkey adopted(became friends)a chicken, because she was very lonely. She had reached the age of sexual maturity but she doesn't have a boyfriend. I don't think other animals can be friends. For example, there is a cat and a dog. They are quite similar but if they meet each other..dsafoifad sjdadsfk dafsk kjfd aowrp jwjopwasd adf;saa; lkj!! It is like this. But I think the chicken is very lonely too. Because he didn't go back to his enclosure even he had abilities to escape. Because of this situation, I knew that other animals can be friends.

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Teacher Glenda


Recently a monkey adopted(became friends)a chicken, because she was very lonely.

>> Correct

She had reached the age of sexual maturity but she doesn\'t have a boyfriend.

>>Correct

I don\'t think other animals can be friends. For example, there is a cat and a dog.

>> I don\'t think other animals can be friends. For example is a cat and a dog.

They are quite similar but if they meet each other..dsafoifad sjdadsfk dafsk kjfd aowrp jwjopwasd adf;saa; lkj!! It is like this. 

>> Correct


 But I think the chicken is very lonely too.

>> Correct

Because he didn\'t go back to his enclosure even he had abilities to escape.

>> Correct

Because of this situation, I knew that other animals can be friends.

>> Correct

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