We ARE different, but we can be friends.
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Recently a monkey adopted(became friends)a chicken, because she was very lonely.
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She had reached the age of sexual maturity but she doesn\'t have a boyfriend.
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I don\'t think other animals can be friends. For example, there is a cat and a dog.
>> I don\'t think other animals can be friends. For example is a cat and a dog.
They are quite similar but if they meet each other..dsafoifad sjdadsfk dafsk kjfd aowrp jwjopwasd adf;saa; lkj!! It is like this.
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But I think the chicken is very lonely too.
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Because he didn\'t go back to his enclosure even he had abilities to escape.
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Because of this situation, I knew that other animals can be friends.
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