We are often assured that our food is “safe”. Is all food “safe”? Is any food “safe”?
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Great essay, Sir [이름]!
Honestly, I love eating junk foods. Hahaha.
Especially when I am stressed, I really crave for it.
I think junk food is already a part of a person\'s life.
Of course, we should always check the food that we eat as much as possible.
Thanks for your time. Have a great day.
Teacher Nina
Exaggerating it a bit, we all eat junk food every day that is detrimental to our health.
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>> Exaggerating it a bit, we all consume junk food every day that is not good for our body.
There is no safe food on our dining table anymore.
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Amid all the shocking news we hear every day regarding food such as re-serving leftovers, putting in chemicals to add flavors, dirty production lines, etc., we don’t know what to eat.
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All of them are contaminated with agricultural pesticide and artificial fertilizers.
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Vegetables and fruits grow in polluted air and ground.
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So, organic food is extremely popular in Korea and some businesses have been commercializing the trend by placing deceptive advertising.
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I think that even the organic food is not safe and there is no pure organic vegetables or fruits.
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People who are conscious about their health try to refrain from eating out to avoid such unhealthy food and prefer to cook at home.
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However, even basic materials and ingredients used to cook are not safe as well.
>> However, even basic materials and ingredients that used in cooking are not safe as well.
We should stick to as natural stuff as possible so there are fewer hidden addictives.
>> Did you mean: We should stick to the natural stuff as much as possible so there are fewer hidden additives.
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