We are often assured that our food is “safe”. Is all food “safe”? Is any food “safe”?

2014-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Exaggerating it a bit, we all eat junk food every day that is detrimental to our health. There is no safe food on our dining table anymore. Amid all the shocking news we hear every day regarding food such as re-serving leftovers, putting in chemicals to add flavors, dirty production lines, etc., we don’t know what to eat. All of them are contaminated with agricultural pesticide and artificial fertilizers. Vegetables and fruits grow in polluted air and ground. So, organic food is extremely popular in Korea and some businesses have been commercializing the trend by placing deceptive advertising. I think that even the organic food is not safe and there is no pure organic vegetables or fruits. People who are conscious about their health try to refrain from eating out to avoid such unhealthy food and prefer to cook at home. However, even basic materials and ingredients used to cook are not safe as well. We should stick to as natural stuff as possible so there are fewer hidden addictives.

강사 첨삭

Great essay, Sir [이름]!

Honestly, I love eating junk foods. Hahaha.

Especially when I am stressed, I really crave for it.

I think junk food is already a part of a person\'s life.

Of course, we should always check the food that we eat as much as possible.

Thanks for your time. Have a great day.

Teacher Nina


Exaggerating it a bit, we all eat junk food every day that is detrimental to our health.

>> Correct

>> Exaggerating it a bit, we all consume junk food every day that is not good for our body.

There is no safe food on our dining table anymore.

>> Correct

Amid all the shocking news we hear every day regarding food such as re-serving leftovers, putting in chemicals to add flavors, dirty production lines, etc., we don’t know what to eat.

>> Correct

All of them are contaminated with agricultural pesticide and artificial fertilizers.

>> Correct

Vegetables and fruits grow in polluted air and ground.

>> Correct

So, organic food is extremely popular in Korea and some businesses have been commercializing the trend by placing deceptive advertising.

>> Correct

I think that even the organic food is not safe and there is no pure organic vegetables or fruits.

>> Correct

People who are conscious about their health try to refrain from eating out to avoid such unhealthy food and prefer to cook at home.

>> Correct

However, even basic materials and ingredients used to cook are not safe as well.

>> However, even basic materials and ingredients that used in cooking are not safe as well.

We should stick to as natural stuff as possible so there are fewer hidden addictives.

>> Did you mean: We should stick to the natural stuff as much as possible so there are fewer hidden additives.

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