We are often told that "you can't buy happiness". If you were richer, do you think you would be happ

2015-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Money can't buy you happiness, can it? A recent research claims that, in fact, the richer you are the happier you become. Richer people studied showed greater levels of well-being - with no upper limit - the more money they had, the happier they were. There are other studies that back up this research. It found that average happiness has risen in nations where the economy has grown the most. The findings are quite self-explanatory about how tough economic times and austerity measures have dampened the happiness and well-being of the people. I do not think that money can solve all the problems and increases happiness. However, it is also true that the poverty is the main cause of social disorder and instability. Many people get divorced, have a conflict, and commit suicide due to financial difficulties. However, the correlation between money and happiness works up to a certain level. If your wealth exceeds the cap, you could be barely happier than others in moment-to-moment experience.

강사 첨삭

I totally agree with you, Sir [이름]!

Money can\'t buy happiness.

I think it depends on a person\'s perspective on how he/ she deals with difficulties.

I saw some people who are not that fortunate or rich but they are really happy.

There are rich people who have everything they want, but not happy,

This topic is really interesting, maybe we can also have this in class.

Take care!

Have a nice weekend.

Teacher Nina


Money can\'t buy you happiness, can it?

>> correct

A recent research claims that, in fact, the richer you are the happier you become.

>> correct

Richer people studied showed greater levels of well-being - with no upper limit - the more money they had, the happier they were.

>> correct

There are other studies that back up this research.

>> correct

It found that average happiness has risen in nations where the economy has grown the most.

>> correct

The findings are quite self-explanatory about how tough economic times and austerity measures have dampened the happiness and well-being of the people.

>> correct

I do not think that money can solve all the problems and increases happiness.

>> correct

However, it is also true that the poverty is the main cause of social disorder and instability.

>> correct

Many people get divorced, have a conflict, and commit suicide due to financial difficulties.

>> correct

However, the correlation between money and happiness works up to a certain level.

>> correct

If your wealth exceeds the cap, you could be barely happier than others in moment-to-moment experience.

>> correct

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