We arrived at SWISS

1. bright --> brighter 2. good --> better 3. hot --> hotter 4. sad --> more sad 5. healthy --> healthier 6. tall --> taller 7. heavy --> heavier 8. fat --> fatter 9. bad --> worse 10. far --> farther We arrived at Swiss in the morning. First of all, we had to find our room we booked. On the way to find our room, we saw the mountain and river. That was really great. they made a harmony. My country is also great, but I think swiss is more attractive. because It is exotic to me. we found our room, and we unpacked our bag. As soon as unpacking our bag, we went to outside. "Time is gold" is right for this moment. because we needed time to see all the street. We visited interlaken. Lake in the interlaken was very beautiful. Luckily, there was a rock festival. So we enjoyed the festival, even we don't know the swiss music. We met some american girls in there. We lightly talked to them and took a picture with them.

Hello there [이름]^^Thank you for sharing this story with me.^^ I hope to visit that place too! Awesome job! Nice composition! You were able to compose good sentences however, let us work on more with the basic sentence pattern. I admire you for using new expressions! Wonderful! Keep it up! See you tomorrow! Teacher Nina   1. bright --> brighter >> Correct 2. good --> better >> Correct 3. hot --> hotter4. sad --> more sad >> sadder 5. healthy --> healthier >> Correct 6. tall --> taller >> Correct 7. heavy --> heavier >> Correct 8. fat --> fatter >> Correct 9. bad --> worse >> Correct 10. far --> farther >> Correct We arrived at Swiss in the morning. >> Correct First of all, we had to find our room we booked. >> First of all, we had to find our room that we reserved. >> OR: We need to find our room first. On the way to find our room, we saw the mountain and river. >> On the way to find our room, we saw a mountain and a river.That was really great. they made a harmony. >> It was really great, they made a harmony.My country is also great, but I think swiss is more attractive. >> Correct because It is exotic to me. >> It is because it is exotic to me. >> OR: It is because it was new to me.we found our room, and we unpacked our bag. >> We found our foom and unpacked our bags.As soon as unpacking our bag, we went to outside. >> As soon as we unpacked our bags, we went outside.\"Time is gold\" is right for this moment. because we needed time to see all the street. >> The saying, \" Time is gold \" is right for this moment, because we needed to see all the streets.We visited interlaken. Lake in the interlaken was very beautiful. >> We visited Interlaken, the lake was very beautiful.Luckily, there was a rock festival. >> Correct So we enjoyed the festival, even we don\'t know the swiss music. >> So we enjoyed the festival, eventhough we don\'t know anything about Swiss music. >> OR: So we enjoyed the festival, eventhough we don\'t know anything about the music in Swiss. We met some american girls in there. >> We met some American girls there.We lightly talked to them and took a picture with them. >> We talked to them and took a picture with them.