We boraded the ship to see the shining Eifel tower.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
It is impossible to live a pleasant life without living wisely and well and justly. And it is impossible to live wisely and well and justly without living a pleasant life.
Hello there! Happy Monday to you! What can you say about the saying above? For me, it maybe very ironic but true. Am I right?^^ We better live a pleasant life by living wisely and well and justly for all of us to head straight to whatever goals we have in life. Have a pleasant day! See you!
~T. Nina^^
1. John moved to London 10 years ago and he _still_ lives there.
>>Correct
2. Julie _always walks to school.
>>Correct
3. \"What time is the accountant coming?\" \"He\'s _already_ here.\"
>>Correct
4. \"I ordered a book last week. Has it arrived _yet____?\".
>>Correct
5. Do you _still_ take milk in your coffee?\".
>>always
We took a ticket for the ship.
>>We bought a ticket for the ship.
And the ship moved slowly.
>>Correct
There were lots of people in the ship.
>>Correct
Most people were not French (because they don\'t have to broad the ship. they always see that seenary.)
>>Correct (because they don\'t have to board the ship. They always see the scenery.)
We meet Korean too, she was studying in USA. and her major was doctor.
>>We met a Korean, too. She is studying in the USA and she wants to be a doctor.
she was great not because of her wisdom, but her dream.
>>Correct (observe capitalization, though)
she confirmed her future. After long conversation with her, My watch indicated me that time is 9 o\'clock.
>>She was certain of her future. After a long conversation with her, it was already 9 o\'clock.
We saw the shining Eifel tower!!
>>Correct [Eiffel]
Of course we took a lot of photos on the ship.
>>Correct
and there was one man beside of us, he was Pilipino.
>>And there was a man beside us, a Filipino.
He asked us to take picture of him.
>>He asked us to take a picture of him.
We took a picture together and went to the house to eat dinner.
>>We also took pictures together and went to the house for dinner.^^
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