We boraded the ship to see the shining Eifel tower.

2013-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

학생이 쓴 원문

1. John moved to London 10 years ago and he _still_ lives there. 2. Julie _always walks to school. 3. "What time is the accountant coming?" "He's _already_ here." 4. "I ordered a book last week. Has it arrived _yet____?". 5. Do you _still_ take milk in your coffee?". We took a ticket for the ship. And the ship moved slowly. There were lots of people in the ship. Most people were not French(because they don't have to broad the ship. they always see that seenary.) We meet Korean too, she was studying in USA. and her major was doctor. she was great not because of her wisdom, but her dream. she confirmed her future. After long conversation with her, My watch indicated me that time is 9 o'clock. We saw the shining Eifel tower!! Of course we took a lot of photos on the ship. and there was one man beside of us, he was Pilipino. He asked us to take picture of him. We took a picture together and went to the house to eat dinner.

강사 첨삭

It is impossible to live a pleasant life without living wisely and well and justly. And it is impossible to live wisely and well and justly without living a pleasant life. 

Hello there! Happy Monday to you! What can you say about the saying above? For me, it maybe very ironic but true. Am I right?^^ We better live a pleasant life by living wisely and well and justly for all of us to head straight to whatever goals we have in life. Have a pleasant day! See you!
~T. Nina^^

 1. John moved to London 10 years ago and he _still_ lives there.

>>Correct
2. Julie _always walks to school.

>>Correct
3. \"What time is the accountant coming?\" \"He\'s _already_ here.\"

>>Correct
4. \"I ordered a book last week. Has it arrived _yet____?\".

>>Correct
5. Do you _still_ take milk in your coffee?\".
>>always

We took a ticket for the ship.
>>We bought a ticket for the ship.
And the ship moved slowly.
>>Correct
There were lots of people in the ship.
>>Correct
Most people were not French (because they don\'t have to broad the ship. they always see that seenary.)
>>Correct (because they don\'t have to board the ship. They always see the scenery.)
We meet Korean too, she was studying in USA. and her major was doctor.
>>We met a Korean, too. She is studying in the USA and she wants to be a doctor.
she was great not because of her wisdom, but her dream.
>>Correct (observe capitalization, though)
she confirmed her future. After long conversation with her, My watch indicated me that time is 9 o\'clock.
>>She was certain of her future. After a long conversation with her, it was already 9 o\'clock.
We saw the shining Eifel tower!!
>>Correct [Eiffel]
Of course we took a lot of photos on the ship.
>>Correct
and there was one man beside of us, he was Pilipino.
>>And there was a man beside us, a Filipino.
He asked us to take picture of him.
>>He asked us to take a picture of him.
We took a picture together and went to the house to eat dinner.
>>We also took pictures together and went to the house for dinner.^^

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