We bought train ticket for swiss

2013-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

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Q1 - We ____ done it yet. haven't Q2 - ____ you think they are coming tonight? Do Q3 - ____ you see them yesterday? Have Q4 - ____ you going this evening? Are Q5 - How long ____ it take you to get home? does Q6 - What ____ you reading at the moment? are Q7 - It was horrible- I really ____ like it. did Q8 - They ____ rung back yet. haven't Q9 - ____ you learn it when you were at school? Did Q10 - ____ you enjoying your meal? Have It was the first day of 2011. We departed from Paris and bought train ticket for swiss. Since swiss was famous for their welfare and winter sport, I hope to see well-made city and some kind of winter sports center. The first day of swiss was strated from taking train. Actually, We bought ticket which of name was "euro-pass" Euro-pass made me able to take all of trains in europe. It was expensive but very useful in my trip. because once we buy it, we can pass all the train. on road to swiss, we saw seenary in the swiss.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday!

Thank you for doing your homework diligently.

I do have some corrections.

I hope you could take the time to go over them for your improvement.

Teacher Nina^^

Q1 - We ____ done it yet.

haven\'t

>>correct

Q2 - ____ you think they are coming tonight?

Do

>>correct

Q3 - ____ you see them yesterday?

Have

>>Did

Q4 - ____ you going this evening?

Are

>>correct

Q5 - How long ____ it take you to get home?

does

>>correct

Q6 - What ____ you reading at the moment?

are

>>correct

Q7 - It was horrible- I really ____ like it.

did

>>didn\'t

Q8 - They ____ rung back yet.

haven\'t

>>correct

Q9 - ____ you learn it when you were at school?

Did

>>correct

Q10 - ____ you enjoying your meal?
Have
>>Are
It was the first day of 2011.
>>correct
We departed from Paris and bought train ticket for swiss.

>>We departed from Paris and bought train tickets for Swiss.

Since swiss was famous for their welfare and winter sport,

>>Since Swiss is famous for their welfare and winter sport,
I hope to see well-made city and some kind of winter sports center.
>>correct
The first day of swiss was strated from taking train.
>>The first day of our trip started with a train ride.
Actually, We bought ticket which of name was \"euro-pass\"
>>Actually, we bought tickets called Euro-pass.
Euro-pass made me able to take all of trains in europe.
>>It allowed us to take all trains in Europe.
It was expensive but very useful in my trip.
>>It was expensive but very useful in our trip,
because once we buy it, we can pass all the train.
>>This is because once we buy it, we can ride all the trains.

on road to swiss, we saw seenary in the swiss.

>>On our way to Swiss, we saw beautiful sceneries.^^

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