We can improve
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We can improve our transport by installing more stations. In the office-going hour,many people use public transportations. So, bus and subway\'s seats are always full. Then, we must stand for long time to go to work. That\'s too bad and unpleasant.
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Hello, [이름] U!
Thank you for always doing your homework, I appreciate you efforts!
Anyway, see you tomorrow!
-T.Jhozel
We can improve our transport by installing more stations.
>> We can improve our transportation by building more stations.
In the office-going hour,many people use public transportations.
>> Many people use public transportation during the working hours.
So, bus and subway\'s seats are always full.
>> Correct!
>> As a result, the seats on the bus and subway are always full.
Then, we must stand for long time to go to work.
>> Correct!
>>OR: Then we had to stand for a long time to get to work.
That\'s too bad and unpleasant.
>> That\'s unfortunate and upsetting.
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