we can learn many thing about our life cause we can get a experience from a actor
학생이 쓴 원문
and sometimes I thought that if I was actor how I do to get the right choice
so I recommend my kid a good movie
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
I\'m not sure if my understanding of your composition was right, but anyway, here\'s my interpretation and correction of it.
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Cheers,
Jean~~
We can learn many thing about our life cause we can get a experience from a actor
and sometimes I thought that if I was actor how I do to get the right choice so I recommend my kid a good movie
>> We can learn many things about life through the experiences of the characters in the film and sometimes, I thought if I were the character, what choices would I make or would I make the right choices? So I recommend movies with good moral lessons to my kid.
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