we can learn many things from the past.

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA

I agree that we can learn many things from the past.

>>> CORRECT
Usually people can learn many things from their experience.

>>> Usually people can learn many things from their experiences.

If you are learning about past you can easily get knowledge about past people experience.

>>> If you are learning about the past you can easily acquire knowledge about the past.

From this knowledge you can prepare something important for the future.

>>> CORRECT

Here is an example. You know, nowadays Korean is struggling with Corona Virus.

>>> Here is an example. You know, nowadays, Koreans are struggling with Corona Virus.

But Korea is responding very well.

>>> CORRECT

The reason why better responding is in the past Korea struggled with other virus.

>>> The reason why better responding it\'s because in the past, Korea has already struggled with other viruses.

At that time Korea learned about how we react that kinds of Virus.

>>> At that time Korea learned about how we react that kinds of Virus.

From that experience Korea is doing well now.

>>> CORRECT

That\'s the one of the reason why I believe that we can learn many things from the past.

>>> That\'s one of the reasons why I believe that we can learn many things from the past.