We can live longer lives?

There are a lot of progress in the field of medicine. Pharmaceutical company making the best medicine. The WHO has been a lot of effort to treat disease. We should pay attention to the environment and healthy. We should not create environmental pollution. We have to exercise for health.

Hi there, Mr. [Name]! Thank you for your composition! You wrote good sentences here. Keep practicing by answering your homework and try to link your sentences to come up with one main idea. Take care and talk to you later! T. JanE ^^ There are a lot of progress in the field of medicine.>> Correct Pharmaceutical company making the best medicine.>> Pharmaceutical companies are making the best medicines.  The WHO has been a lot of effort to treat disease.>> The WHO has been exerting a lot of effort to treat diseases.  We should pay attention to the environment and healthy.>> We should pay attention to the environment and to our health.  We should not create environmental pollution.>> Correct We have to exercise for health. >> We have to exercise in order to be healthy.