We can't live without Earth!

Let me intro..... When we sleep and doing something, the Artic is still thawing glaciers. Because of Golor warming. The Golor Warming was made by human. But Golor Warming was non-existent a milion years ago. And a few centrys past,humans are found something. That is a coal. coal cause golor warming. And now we have to stop Golor Warming. Maybe many island like Jaju and England will be sink in the water. Do you know the small island Tuvalu ? It has nine island. Tuvalu is the smallest island in the world. But It's getting sink in the water. Nowdays two islands are sink in the water,also the sea level is increase. Tuvalu citizens are fear with scared. Than,after fews later, what's happen next? They also sink in the wawter. Because od Golor Wariming. We have to stop the carbon dioxide. And tuen off needlessness electricity. Las,we have to reduce to riding a car. When We keep this promise We save our Earth. And don't say this Earth is mine. Thank you to listen my spee

Hi Justin! Thanks for sharing your thoughts about global warming. I\'m impressed.  It\'s great to know that a kid like you is concerned about the earth. I hope we can all do something about this serious problem. Anyway, I noticed a lot of mistakes here especially with the capitalization, punctuation and spelling so please be careful next time! Check my corrections below. Talk to you tomorrow! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ Let me intro..... >> Let me introduce myself.When we sleep and doing something, the Artic is still thawing glaciers. >> While we are sleeping or doing something, the Arctic glaciers are still thawing.Because of Golor warming. >> It\'s because of global warming.The Golor Warming was made by human. >> Global warming was caused by humans.But Golor Warming was non-existent a milion years ago. >> It was non-existent millions of years ago.And a few centrys past,humans are found something. >> After a few centuries, humans discovered something.That is a coal. >> They found coal.coal cause golor warming. >> Coal causes global warming. And now we have to stop Golor Warming. >> And now we have to stop global warming.Maybe many island like Jaju and England will be sink in the water. >> Maybe a lot of islands ike Jeju and countries like England will sink in water.Do you know the small island Tuvalu ? It has nine island. >> Do you know the small island, Tuvalu? It has nine small islands.Tuvalu is the smallest island in the world. >> CORRECTBut It\'s getting sink in the water. >> But it is sinking under water.Nowdays two islands are sink in the water,also the sea level is increase. >> Nowadays, two of its islands are under water. The sea level also went up.Tuvalu citizens are fear with scared. >> Tuvalu citizens are scared about this.Than,after fews later, what\'s happen next? >> After a few years, what will happen next?They also sink in the wawter.>> They will also sink under water. Because od Golor Wariming.>> It\'s all because if global warming. We have to stop the carbon dioxide.>> We have to stop using products that emit carbon dioxide. And tuen off needlessness electricity.>> And turn off unnecessary electricity. Las,we have to reduce to riding a car.>> Lastly, we have to reduce the use of cars. OR >> Lastly, we have to avoid riding cars as much as possible. When We keep this promise We save our Earth.>> CORRECT OR >> When we keep this promise, we save our earth. *Take note of proper capitalization and punctuation. ^^ And don\'t say this Earth is mine.>> Don\'t say that this earth is mine, it\'s ours. Thank you to listen my spee >> Thank you for listening to my speech.