We do it altogether.
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Hello Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition.
Please take note of the corrections below.
The thing that you need to focus on is your choice of words.
There are some expressions that are best suited for particular situations.
Try to familiarize yourself with them.
~~ Teacher Sharon
When chores occur around the house, my father let me help him.
>> If there are chores to do around the house, my father lets me help him do all of those.
We eat dinner altogehter in a table already prepared by my mom.
>> We eat dinner together at the table prepared by my mom.
We, our family, do well about one\'s own chores.
>> We, as a family, do our own part in the house.
So we don\'t think it is a irritaing work to do.
>> So we don\'t think that chores are bothersome.
I often dispose of house garbage of my family.
>> I often take out the trash at home.
We just live all happy together.
>> We live happily together.
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