we had a great time on last weekend..

we had a great time on last weekend.. Carolyn had watched TV and one of tv show indicated special restaurant which serves beef complimentary. She wanted to go there, so we decided to visit there on Saturday. The taste of beef was good and we ate alot. Actually She has been on a diet Since fist day of march. It seems that she would quit diet. and we went to Seoul, the capital of korea, to enjoy our 500th anniversary day. I planned the schedule. It was the first time to get seoul with my driving. Parking is the most important thing because Seoul is the most crowed city. Fortunately, I found the place additionally it was free parking lot. we took a subway. She became a college student, so we went to "University street"(It is the name of the street.). there were lots of play site. we enjoyed play. ~~

Good evening to you [이름]! Thank you for sharing about your weekend.I am sure that both of you were really happy. I hope that you will always be strong and your relationship too. You did a good job but please be mindful of the sentence structure. Always find time to learn new words for you to compose better sentences. See you tomorrow! Good night!Teacher Nina   we had a great time on last weekend.. >> We had a great time last weekend. Carolyn had watched TV and one of tv show indicated special restaurant which serves beef complimentary. >> Did you mean: Carolyn watched a TV show that indicated a special restaurant that serves beef.She wanted to go there, so we decided to visit there on Saturday. >> She wanted to go there, so we decided to visit that place last Saturday. The taste of beef was good and we ate alot. >> Correct Actually She has been on a diet Since fist day of march. >> Did you mean: Actually, she has been on a diet since the first day of March. It seems that she would quit diet. >> It seemed that she would quit in dieting. and we went to Seoul, the capital of korea, to enjoy our 500th anniversary day. >> And we went to Seoul, the capital city of Korea to enjoy our five hundredth day being together. >> OR: And we went to Seoul, the capital city of Korea to enjoy our anniversary together. I planned the schedule. >> I made the schedule.>> OR: I planned our itinerary. It was the first time to get seoul with my driving. >> It was my first time to go to Seoul with me driving the car. Parking is the most important thing because Seoul is the most crowed city. >> Parking is the most important thing because Seoul is the most crowded city. Fortunately, I found the place additionally it was free parking lot. >> Fortunately, I found a place and in addition it was the parking was for free. we took a subway. >> We took the subway. She became a college student, so we went to \"University street\"(It is the name of the street.). >> Did you mean: She felt like she was a college student again, so we went to the \"University Street\' (It is the name of the street). >> OR: She felt like she was a college student again, so we went to a street called \'University Street\". there were lots of play site. >> Did you mean: There were lots of places where you can watch a play.we enjoyed play. ~~ >> We enjoyed the play. >> OR: We enjoyed the play that we watched.