we have an obligation to succeed the beautiful world to the next generations !
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you worry about the world’s changing weather? Why?
I always worry about the world\'s changing weather. All over the world, the winter is disappearing. The temperature is getting increasing and Ice in Antarctica and the North Pole is getting melting... I am so sad about it. Sometimes i can see the polar bears living in Ice areas on TV. The more Ice is melting, They can\'t live there and eat something. I\'m so sorry to see that. we have an obligation to succeed the beautiful world to the next generations. That\'s why we have to care about the world\'s changing weather. I don\'t use plastics a lot also I recycle. I think a little effort can stop the world\'s changing weather.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your homework to me. ^^
I really appreciate it.
I also feel the same way. I\'m getting worried about our world\'s changing weather.
It is something that every human should care about.
Anyway, I\'ll see you later! Have a nice day! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
All over the world, the winter is disappearing.
>> CORRECT.
The temperature is getting increasing and Ice in Antarctica and the North Pole is getting melting.
>> The temperature is increasing and the ice in Antarctica and North Pole are melting.
I am so sad about it.
>> CORRECT.
Sometimes i can see the polar bears living in Ice areas on TV.
>> CORRECT.
The more Ice is melting, They can\'t live there and eat something.
>> The more ice melting, the more they can\'t live there and eat something.
I\'m so sorry to see that.
>> CORRECT.
We have an obligation to succeed the beautiful world to the next generations.
>>We have an obligation to pass the beautiful world to the next generations.
That\'s why we have to care about the world\'s changing weather.
>>CORRECT.
I don\'t use plastics a lot also I recycle.
>> I don\'t use plastics a lot and I also recycle.
I think a little effort can stop the world\'s changing weather.
>> CORRECT.
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