We have to clean our teeeth very clearly
학생이 쓴 원문
Some people brush there teeth at very short time. This is very not good at our health. I got a class that learned brushing teeth when covid19 wasn\'t here. We have to brushing our teeth over 2minutes, also I brush my teeth over 3minutes. If we don\'t brush our teeth very well, our mouth are became sick, and sometimes teeth became sick too. On friday, I will go to the dental clinc, after that I will brush my teeth very well!
강사 첨삭
Hi Maria!
Having the perfect smile and the best shiny white teeth is a must when you are a very friendly person. After all, you will always have to talk and make people comfortable and happy with your speech. I wish that you will have a good time at the clinic on Friday.
Here on this composition, you had only very few mistakes. Take time to look at them closely.
I would like to thank you for a job well done always.
Take care.
-T. Donna =)
>> Some people brush their teeth at very a very short time. This is not very good for our health.
I got a class that learned brushing teeth when covid19 wasn\'t here.
>> I had a class and learned brushing teeth before Covid-19.
We have to brushing our teeth over 2minutes, also I brush my teeth over 3minutes.
>> We have to brush our teeth for over 2minutes. Also, I brush my teeth over 3minutes.
If we don\'t brush our teeth very well, our mouth are became sick, and sometimes teeth became sick too.
>> If we don\'t brush our teeth very well, our mouth will become sick and sometimes our teeth will became sick too.
On friday, I will go to the dental clinc, after that I will brush my teeth very well!
>> On Friday, I will go to the dental clinic. After that, I will brush my teeth very well!
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