we have to face things we don't want

2017-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

To to told, many people like to listen to good words and sweet recomandation about themselves, but we sometimes need to hear bad words on us and take advice without any suffering. we are living in the real world that is survival world. If we want to avoid torulbe situation, we have to confront things we don't face and we don't like. As a result, we can go up thanks to things we didn't want.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! ^_^
How\'s your day going so far?

Thanks for taking the time to write in our composition board today.

I truly appreciate it. :)

I agree that most of us want to hear good things and set aside the bad ones.

I think we learn more from our flaws rather than our merits.

I think the lesson imprints inside our hearts and minds more when we are hurt.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re still doing great.

See you again tomorrow. ^_^
~Teacher Charry

To to told, many people like to listen to good words and sweet recomandation about themselves, but we sometimes need to hear bad words on us and take advice without any suffering.

>> Truth to be told, many people like to listen to good words and sweet recomandation about themselves, but we sometimes need to hear bad words about us and take advice without any suffering.

we are living in the real world that is survival world.

>> We are living in the real world which is a world of survival.

If we want to avoid torulbe situation, we have to confront things we don\'t face and we don\'t like.

>> If we want to avoid troublesome situations, we have to confront the things that we don\'t want to face and we don\'t like.

As a result, we can go up thanks to things we didn\'t want.

>> As a result, we can go up. Thanks to the things we didn\'t want.

OR >> As a result, we can move up the ladder because of the things we didn\'t want.

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