We have to work because it's God's wish...

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Thank you for this composition.

I have made some modifications for you to review later on.

We can also talk about this in class if you want to.

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Enjoy the rest of the day!

_T. Mayleen :)

There are saying in Holy Bible, man must work hard sweating to live up his family..

>>> The Bibles says man must work hard for his family.
I am a christian..

>>> I am a Christian.
In frankly speaking,, I do not neet to work because I am not a adult..

>>> Frankly speaking, I do not need to work because I am not an adult.
Working has many following things..as it is, responsiblity, cooperation,, and so on...

>>> Working includes responsibility, cooperation, and a lot more.
I do not know what I write rightly my thought ..

>>> I do not know how to express my thoughts in writing.
what if we do not have to work, the world shall turn to paradise..

>>> If we don\'t have to work then the world will be like a paradise.
There is no need for work in heaven.. because it is the God\'s world..

>>> There\'s no need to work in heaven because God will provide everything.
Thanks for reading..

>>> Correct!