We know that exercise is important for health, but why don\'t all people do it?

2019-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

Battermost office worker is to be wet ordinary because they do not exercise to making an excuse everyday. A few persons is giving the money and time for returning to health with loosing the weight since losing the health and regreting their habits. The persons of seriously feeling and practicing is not enough one,Although listening contents on TV or media occasionally. It is not only time for exercise but also time isn’t because doing not exercise. We have to always agonize about big influence how to use in one’s left life. We must be invest of the times for ourselves, Refusing the place of drinking for associating with co-workers to no purpose.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. T[이름]k you for this. Healthy living is definitely necessary. We should start living a healthy lifestyle before it\'s too late. Good luck!

- T. Beth

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Battermost office worker is to be wet ordinary because they do not exercise to making an excuse everyday.

>>>   Most office workers make an excuse to not workout every day. 
A few persons is giving the money and time for returning to health with loosing the weight since losing the health and regreting their habits.

>>> Few people spend money and time to be healthy by losing weight since losing your health is something you would regret later.   
 The persons of seriously feeling and practicing is not enough one,Although listening contents on TV or media occasionally.

>>>  People who exercise feel that ir;\'s not enough even though they listen to healthy contents on the media or watch TV occasionally.  
 It is not only time for exercise but also time isn’t because doing not exercise. 

>>>  We should not only think of the time we exercise but also the time when we don\'t exercise.  
We have to always agonize about big influence how to use in one’s left life. 

>>>  We have to always agonize about the big influence of exercise in one’s life. 
We must be invest of the times for ourselves, Refusing the place of drinking for associating with co-workers to no purpose.

>>> We must invest time for ourselves, refusing the time to drink with co-workers because it has no purpose.   

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