We make choices almost everyday in our daily life. Have you ever made a wrong choice in your life?
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Hi [이름]! :)
Happy Wednesday!
How are you? ^^,
Thank you for sparing some of your time to think and do your homework today.
You\'re really lucky to have gone to Australia.
A lot of people, including me, dream of travelling to other countries. ^^,
Even if you just spent 4 months, you must have had a lot of experience.
And think of all the friends you\'ve made. :)
We make decisions almost everyday.
And these decisions have a great impact in our life.
It was indeed a chance wasted but don\'t feel too bad.
You can always learn English anytime. :)
You just have to continue practicing.
And maybe one day, you can have the chance to go back to Australia or to another country to study English.
I hope to talk to you later in class [이름].
See you! ^^,)
--- Teacher Jacey :)
I made a wrong choice when I went to Austrailia in 2009.
>> I made a wrong choice when I went to Australia in 2009.
I took one semester off and visited there to study english.
>> I took one semester off and visited there to study English.
First month in Austrailia was successful.
>> My first month in Australia was successful.
I enrolled language school and did my best to learn Ielts and met lots of friends in there.
>> I enrolled in a language school and did my best to learn IELTS. I also met a lot of friends there.
However, after that I started hang out with my friends often rather than study.
>> However, after I started to hang out more often with my friends rather than study.
The rest of 3 month in Austrailia, I seldom study for Ielts.
>> I seldom studied IELTS for the rest of my remaining months in Australia.
I throwed away the great chance to develope my english.
>> I threw away a great chanced to develop my Englsih skills.
OR
I wasted a big chance to develop my English skills.
Therefore, I believed that I made a wrong decision when I was in Austrailia.
>> Therefore, I believe that I made a wrong decision when I was in Australia.
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