We make choices almost everyday in our daily life. Have you ever made a wrong choice in your life?

2016-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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I made a wrong choice when I went to Austrailia in 2009. I took one semester off and visited there to study english. First month in Austrailia was successful. I enrolled language school and did my best to learn Ielts and met lots of friends in there. However, after that I started hang out with my friends often rather than study. The rest of 3 month in Austrailia, I seldom study for Ielts. I throwed away the great chance to develope my english. Therefore, I believed that I made a wrong decision when I was in Austrailia.

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Hi [이름]! :)

Happy Wednesday!

How are you? ^^,


Thank you for sparing some of your time to think and do your homework today.

You\'re really lucky to have gone to Australia.

A lot of people, including me, dream of travelling to other countries. ^^,


Even if you just spent 4 months, you must have had a lot of experience.

And think of all the friends you\'ve made. :)


We make decisions almost everyday.

And these decisions have a great impact in our life.


It was indeed a chance wasted but don\'t feel too bad.

You can always learn English anytime. :)

You just have to continue practicing.

And maybe one day, you can have the chance to go back to Australia or to another country to study English.


I hope to talk to you later in class [이름].

See you! ^^,)


--- Teacher Jacey :)



I made a wrong choice when I went to Austrailia in 2009.

>> I made a wrong choice when I went to Australia in 2009.



I took one semester off and visited there to study english.

>> I took one semester off and visited there to study English.



First month in Austrailia was successful.

>> My first month in Australia was successful.



I enrolled language school and did my best to learn Ielts and met lots of friends in there.

>> I enrolled in a language school and did my best to learn IELTS. I also met a lot of friends there.



However, after that I started hang out with my friends often rather than study.

>> However, after I started to hang out more often with my friends rather than study.



The rest of 3 month in Austrailia, I seldom study for Ielts.

>> I seldom studied IELTS for the rest of my remaining months in Australia.



I throwed away the great chance to develope my english.

>> I threw away a great chanced to develop my Englsih skills.

OR

I wasted a big chance to develop my English skills.



Therefore, I believed that I made a wrong decision when I was in Austrailia.

>> Therefore, I believe that I made a wrong decision when I was in Australia.


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