We must have a quality time.
학생이 쓴 원문
We must have a quality time.
Although we have many works,
we must make a balance between work and family.
The works isn't worth loosing my family.
It is right.
But when I work hard very much,
I sometimes forget my family.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I agree with you.. We should always spend quality time with our family..
I understand that because of a busy life, sometimes we tend to forget our families
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