We should do study to know the environmental pollution.
학생이 쓴 원문
Environmental pollution is broadcasted.
The internet is well known to everybody.
And it tells us every news to us.
Today I wake up early and ate breakfast as possible as I can.
And I drove the motorcycle to the neighborhoods of my village.
The weather is too cold to drive.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
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We should do study to know the environmental pollution.
>>>We should study to know the environmental pollution.
Environmental pollution is broadcasted.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>Environmental pollution is being broadcasted.
The internet is well known to everybody.
The internet is well known to everybody.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>> The internet is popular to everybody.
And it tells us every news to us.
And it tells us every news to us.
>>>And it tells every news to us.
Today I wake up early and ate breakfast as possible as I can.
Today I wake up early and ate breakfast as possible as I can.
>>>Today, I woke up early and ate breakfast as much as I can.
And I drove the motorcycle to the neighborhoods of my village.
And I drove the motorcycle to the neighborhoods of my village.
>>> And I drove the motorcycle to the neighborhoods of my village.
The weather is too cold to drive.
The weather is too cold to drive.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>> The weather is too cold for driving.
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