we should prepare something if possible.
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Hi Elliot!
Thank you so much for sharing about your thought process when encountering delayed food orders. Personally, I find it difficult to complain when my food is delayed, even when I am in a hurry, I will just kindly ask the personnel to please bring my food quickly, but I will not leave the restaurant because I feel so bad about the food that I ordered. Anyway! great job on explaining. You made great sentences.
For today\'s corrections, I found that there are some sentences which are best joined together. Other than that, only some punctuation and capitalization corrections.
Thank you for your effort and I look forward to the next one!
-Teacher Violet.
First opinion.
>> CORRECT!If the waiting time is long.
>> CORRECT!If the ordered food was delayed by more than one hour and thirty minutes. Maybe I would be upset.
>> If the ordered food was delayed by more than one hour and thirty minutes, maybe I would be upset.
Of course, if there was an explanation in advance. I could understand that, and I would make a different plan.
>> Of course, if there was an explanation in advance, I could understand that, and I would make a different plan.
But if there wasn’t an explanation, even I would not have received the food.
>> CORRECT!Maybe before it was delivered, I would check and cancel the order.
>> CORRECT!I think unexpected things can happen in our life. even if we care more.
>> I think unexpected things can happen in our life even if we care more.
So the most important thing is timely communication.
>> CORRECT!Secondly, my limit time for waiting is about fifteen minutes or thirty minutes.
>> Secondly, my limit for waiting is about fifteen or thirty minutes.
But I said before, more important is proper and timely communication.
>> But as I said before, proper and timely communication is more important.
Anyway, we cannot live according to a plan, because all circumstances can change by me, by others, by somethings else, so we should prepare something that if possible.
>> Anyway, we cannot live according to plan because all circumstances can be changed by me, by others, or by something else, so we should prepare for all possibilities.
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