We visited Lion carving.

2013-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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The town where I was born is a hundred miles from here. That's the college in which I used to work. That's the house where I was born in. Does anyone know where she's from? Do you know which country she's from? The town which I was born in is a hundred miles from here. That's the college where I used to work. That's the house where I was born. The town in which I was born is a hundred miles from here. That's the college which I used to work in. 11.1.3. We visited the Lion carving. the Lion carving was a meaningful sculpture. It commemorate swiss hired soldiers who dedicated to French royal families. andthen we went to grocery because of the high price. we bought some of fast foods. Swiss has a beautiful sight but just for it. So we strolled street and found street burger. We thought it was only chance to eat Swiss street burger So we bought it. burger was expensive it was almost 16000 won.

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A wonderful night [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework even though you feel tried, you still did it. You did a marvelous job with your homework. ^^ Nice! Keep up the good attitude of yours, aim higher. Please go over the corrections below and if you have any questions, tell it in class tomorrow. See you! Good night!Teacher Nina   The town where I was born is a hundred miles from here. >> Correct!That\'s the college in which I used to work. >> Correct!That\'s the house where I was born in. >> which Does anyone know where she\'s from? >> Correct!Do you know which country she\'s from? >> Correct!The town which I was born in is a hundred miles from here. >> Correct!That\'s the college where I used to work. >> Correct!That\'s the house where I was born. >> Correct!The town in which I was born is a hundred miles from here. >> Correct!That\'s the college which I used to work in. >> Correct!11.1.3.We visited the Lion carving. >> Better: We visited the place where a carved lion is located.the Lion carving was a meaningful sculpture. >> Correct!It commemorate swiss hired soldiers who dedicated to French royal families. >> Did you mean: It comemmorates the Swiss hired soldiers who were dedicated serving the Frech royal families.andthen we went to grocery because of the high price. >> Did you mean: And then, we went to the grocery but the price was a bit expensive. we bought some of fast foods. >> We bought some instant food.Swiss has a beautiful sight but just for it. >> Swiss has a beautiful sight that\'s all.So we strolled street and found street burger. >> So we walked on the street and found a burger stall.We thought it was only chance to eat Swiss street burger >> We thought it was the only chance for us to eat a Swiss burger.So we bought it. >> Correct! burger was expensive it was almost 16000 won. >> The burger was expensive it was almost 16000 won.

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