We went to into the Duomo

2013-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. We know a girl who speaks Italian. 2. My brother lives in a small town _where there is only one library. 3. My sister lives in a big city which has several libraries. 4. The people who work at the supermarket are very nice. 5. The restaurant needs a waiter who has a lot of experience. 6. Paul is a student at a school which has some Canadian teachers. 7. Susan is a teacher at a school where many of the students are from Portugal. 8. Here is a picture of the fire which destroyed all their things. 9. The restaurant where she works is very expensive. 10. She is visiting someone who was once a professional dancer. We went to into the Duomo. It was sophisticate as it's outside. there were beautiful stained glasses. It was great! After having seen the inside of Duomo, we found a Garibaldi statue. He known as a hero who devoted to unify the Italy peninsula. Of course, we took some photos in front of it. and then, we headed to next structure.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Thank you for being active in class tonight! You made me really happy because of your performance. You deserve a round of applause! You got a perfect score! Wow! I want to visit Italy someday. I was able to know the beautiful places because of you. Thank you for sharing those wonderful memories you had. Keep on writing! See you in class! Teacher Nina   1. We know a girl who speaks Italian. >> Correct! 2. My brother lives in a small town _where there is only one library. >> Correct! 3. My sister lives in a big city which has several libraries. >> Correct! 4. The people who work at the supermarket are very nice. >> Correct! 5. The restaurant needs a waiter who has a lot of experience. >> Correct! 6. Paul is a student at a school which has some Canadian teachers. >> Correct! 7. Susan is a teacher at a school where many of the students are from Portugal. >> Correct! 8. Here is a picture of the fire which destroyed all their things. >> Correct! 9. The restaurant where she works is very expensive. >> Correct! 10. She is visiting someone who was once a professional dancer. >> Correct! We went to into the Duomo. >> We went inside the Duomo. It was sophisticate as it\'s outside. >> It was sophisticated as it isoutside. >> OR: The place was sophisticated like it is outside.there were beautiful stained glasses. >> Correct! It was great! >> Correct! After having seen the inside of Duomo, we found a Garibaldi statue. >>  Did you mean: After entering Duomo, we found a Garibaldi statue.He known as a hero who devoted to unify the Italy peninsula. >> He was known as a hero, who was devoted to unify Italy peninsula. >> OR: He was known as a hero, who unified Italy peninsula.Of course, we took some photos in front of it. >> Correct! and then, we headed to next structure. >> Correct!  >> OR: And then, we headed to next structure.

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