we went to milano

there is a bag on the table. there is a calendar on the wall. there are two posters in my room. there is a banana in this basket. there are six chairs in the kitchen. there are lots of books in the shelf. there is a mirror in our hall. there are 12 cushions on the sofa. there is a big wardrobe in my sister's bedroom. there are children in the yard. Fanally, the time had come, when we had to leave swiss. I was happy, because it was boring when we were in swiss. we took a train and we reached milano, the center of Italy economy and fashion. first of all we visited a building called Duomo. It is a kind of dorm shaped church. I herd that Duomo of milano is famous nationally. there were many people in that place but the huge structure overwhelmed all of the people. One man fed many doves and he gave us some bird food. my friend took a food and fed doves. suddenly he wanted to the cost of the food. luckily we didn't have money at that time.

Hi [이름]! Wow! I am so happy that you are sending me a lot of homework today. ^^ It shows that you want to share a lot of things. ^^ Just keep on writing! I will be glad to help you in terms of your writing skills too. You often forget to write in capital letters the first letter of your sentence. And also don\'t forget to use punctuation marks such as period and comma. ^^ These things are really important in writing. ^^ Thank you so much for your time! See you in class! Teacher Nina   there is a bag on the table. >> Correct! there is a calendar on the wall. >> Correct! there are two posters in my room. >> Correct! there is a banana in this basket. >> Correct! there are six chairs in the kitchen. >> Correct! there are lots of books in the shelf. >> Correct! there is a mirror in our hall. >> Correct! there are 12 cushions on the sofa. >> Correct! there is a big wardrobe in my sister\'s bedroom. >> Correct! there are children in the yard. >> Correct! ( Don\'t forget to start your sentence in capital letter. ^^)Fanally, the time had come, when we had to leave swiss. >> Finally, the time had come, when we have to leave Swiss. I was happy, because it was boring when we were in swiss. >> Correct! we took a train and we reached milano, the center of Italy economy and fashion. >> Correct! >> OR: We took a train and we reached Milano, it is the center of economy and fashion in Italy. >> OR: We took a train and reached the center of economy and fashion, Milano Italy. first of all we visited a building called Duomo. >> Correct! >> OR: First of all, we visited a building called Duomo.It is a kind of dorm shaped church. >> It is a dorm shaped church. I herd that Duomo of milano is famous nationally. >> I heard that Duomo in Milano is famous nationally. >> OR: Duomo is famous nationally. there were many people in that place but the huge structure overwhelmed all of the people. >> Correct! >> OR: There were a lot of people in that place, but the huge structure overwhelmed all of the people.One man fed many doves and he gave us some bird food. >> A man fed many doves and he gave us some bird food too.my friend took a food and fed doves. >> My friend got some food and fed the doves. suddenly he wanted to the cost of the food. >> Suddenly, he wanted us to pay for the cost of the food. luckily we didn\'t have money at that time. >> Correct! >> OR: Luckily, we didn\'t have money at that time.