We will eat.....
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Hello there!^.^
Thank you for sharing your experience and what happened last Friday was just fine.^.^
I can really feel that you had a great time last weekend!^.^
Anyhow, I hope you can find time to check the corrections I made in your sentences.
If you have questions, feel free to ask them in class.
See you!^.^
~~Teacher Nina~~
Yesterday, I mean last friday, I couldn\'t respond your call.
>> Yesterday, I mean last Friday, I couldn\'t respond to your call.
Becuase I thought I postphoned my class on friday.
>> Because I thought I postponed our Friday class.
So we went to theather to use the free tickets which I got.
>> So we went to the theater and used the free tickets which I got.
That means, we were in the theather.
>> So, we were in the theater.
the movie was great and fun.
>> The movie was great and funny!^^
Actually, I want to eat hamburger and dducbboki but i coudln\'\'t.
>> Actually, I wanted to eat hamburger and dducbboki but I couldn\'t.^^
when the movie was over, It was too late.
>> When the movie was over, it was too late for me to eat.
We strolled the downtown of the city, Finally we found chicken cafe where selling chicken 24 hours.
>> We strolled along downtown and finally found a chicken cafe where they are selling chicken for 24 hours.
We enjoyed our meal and planed what to eat.
>> Correct!
but I don\'t remember that.
>> Correct^^ [capitalization]
In this morning, we visited riceburger restaurant and skipped lunch.
>> This morning, we visited a riceburger restaurant and skipped lunch.
I strongly eager to eat delicious food.
>> I am eager to eat a delicious food.^^
Carolyn may choose the menu which we will eat.
>> Correct!
Whatever we eat, I hope that food to give us satisfaction.
>> Whatever we may eat, I hope will give us satisfaction.^^
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