Wealth and Poverty (1)

Topic : Wealth and Poverty Capitalism is dominant over the world. Some of the major country like U.S.A. are leading global economy. They think that the enterprise is important to increase the growth of economy and They should be support by goverment. So, Wall Street's power is absurd.( Although The presdent Obama gives pressure to Wall Street, The foundation of Purtanism'll be unchanged.) Actually, This environment makes wealth and poverty in the world. Some country that doesn't have big companies or base of Capitalism are poor. Of course, I don't like the Socialism (Because, I know the North Korea's vice of Socialism.)

Hello [이름]!! Thank you for your message.   I corrected some of your sentences here . There are just minor grammar slips so please check on them and see what you need to work on. ^__^ Have a good day! CIAO! =T.Marie=   Topic : Wealth and Poverty >>>correct^^Capitalism is dominant over the world. >>>Capitalism is dominant all over the world.Some of the major country like U.S.A. are leading global economy. >>>Some of the major countries like U.S.A lead the global economy.They think that the enterprise is important to increase the growth of economy and They should be support by goverment. >>>They think that entrepreneurship is important to achieve growth in the economy and they should be supported by the government.So, Wall Street's power is absurd.( Although The presdent Obama gives pressure to Wall Street, The foundation of Purtanism'll be unchanged.)>>>correct^^ ** presdent - President ** Purtanism - Puritanism Actually, This environment makes wealth and poverty in the world. Some country that doesn't have big companies or base of Capitalism are poor. Of course, I don't like the Socialism (Because, I know the North Korea's vice of Socialism.) >>>correct^^